My Second Shine!

Alright fellas, here it is; my second poem gotten from my poetry collection.Do well to check it out guys and tell me ur thoughts.

SUPERNOVA

Even in the throes of despair
I have nothing at all to fear
Rather than feel down and despondent
I feel strong and in charge like a president
Not over others, but over my own
Cos that what I am; a man alone
Though enemies try to make loneliness my portion
I make myself a priority not an option
They ridicule and mock me in my face
But I see that as a passing phase
Cos when they see me fly high up into the skies
Shock and surprise will paint their eyes
It’s a nova a nova they’ll cry
Just for a moment and he’ll die
But I’ll smile and shine ever so bright
Until I explode and make them go blind
Then they will all know
What they should’ve known
That I’m not just a star, a nova
But a blinding bright SUPER NOVA

My first attempt @ poetry

Remember on my last post I said something about me writing a little collection of poetry titled “Poems from Ma Heart”; okay guys here it is a sample from my collection, written during one of my low days.
To all my peeps who may have felt lonely@ one time or the other in their lives, this is for you!
Check it out and tell moi watcha think!

LONELINESS
I am sinking, sinking into quicksand
In the depths of lonely land
With frightened, terrified eyes I look around
But there is no one to be found
I am scared, at my wits end
As far as I can see, no friend
The more I try to pull myself up free
The more it sucks me in chest deep
But wait, I see faces like a glimmer of hope
Coming to my aid like a saving rope
I hold on, clinging to it for my dear life
But it disappears cutting my heart like a knife
I am disappointed at them I begin to say
But my mouth is filled with the sands of dismay
Realization strikes me I’m all alone
No one by me, on my own
I choke on a sob feeling helpless
As the last grains of sand burn my eyes and I am buried in loneliness