How do you rate my poem"LONELINESS"?

Thursday, March 31, 2011

My Second Shine!

Alright fellas, here it is; my second poem gotten from my poetry collection.Do well to check it out guys and tell me ur thoughts.





SUPERNOVA

Even in the throes of despair
I have nothing at all to fear
Rather than feel down and despondent
I feel strong and in charge like a president
Not over others, but over my own
Cos that what I am; a man alone
Though enemies try to make loneliness my portion
I make myself a priority not an option
They ridicule and mock me in my face
But I see that as a passing phase
Cos when they see me fly high up into the skies
Shock and surprise will paint their eyes
It’s a nova a nova they’ll cry
Just for a moment and he’ll die
But I’ll smile and shine ever so bright
Until I explode and make them go blind
Then they will all know
What they should’ve known
That I’m not just a star, a nova
But a blinding bright SUPER NOVA